I think i should put that (among other things) on a sign above my desk at school. I get the same suggestions on essays every time, and i really should make more of an effort to have said suggestions in my consciousness when i'm writing. She suggested numerous instances where i could have elaborated. I would like to point out that the essay was supposed to be approximately 2500 words and mine was 2600+. This whole longer-than-required in a school essay thing is nearly unheard of for me, a girl whose essays are usually approximately half the stipulated length. Insistent on pushing us, she didn't give me an A, but she thought it was very good and that i'm very much A-quality. Yay.